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What a tear jerker!!! I won't forget this story anytime soon.
So touching. This gave me chills. I loved it. Good work.
This is absolutely beautiful, wonderful writing to touch the heart.
This is so touching. I kept thinking of my dear friend who lost his wife but continues to stay active in church partly because he promised her he would. Great job!
Even though it is sad, it is so beautifully written,I read it through twice. Excellent!
Sniffle... Sniffle.. One moment please while I regain composure. Thanks for sharing this, it was beautifu1. Written with great care I can tell, God smiles on this one. Keep up the blessed writing, it looks good on paper!

P.S. This is the 2nd time God has brought my attention to Psalm 91, wonder what He's trying to tell me, maybe 3rd time will bring about the understand. I shall go read it again!
I had to come back to this a few times this week -- and I never could get through the whole piece in one reading. This is heart-wrenching, yet so beautiful. Absolutely amazing emotions you create. Excpetional job with the topic.
This is beautifully written-and so heartfelt, I can't help but feel a jumble of mixed emotions for the MC, there is so much going on, so much heart and feeling. This was well done and excellently presented, I liked the letter format and especially the last paragraph. Wonderful writing!
Oh, Loren, this is so tender and lovely and beautiful. Your descriptions are so vivid. So wonderful and heartfelt.