The Official Writing Challenge
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You've captured the mind and vivid imagination of a child exceptionally well. What fun!
This was too cute and fun. The end needs something -- don't quite know what though :(
Cute, fun and imaginative. This definitely kept me giggling.
Cute! (Some kids love to make up words -- future writers?)
PS Kids would also love the made-up/silly sounding words!
Good read for children. Congrats on the win.
This is great! It's so creative. I know lots of little boys like the one in your story (or maybe one really well). Nothing is ever his fault. I will have to read this to him. Congratulations.
This is very charming. What kid wouldn't love this? Congrats on the win too, my friend.
Nice job. I like your make belive characters the child congers up. They seem so much fun that it's too bad they aren't real. They're not real are they?grin.Janice
Congrats, sweetie! Excellent stuff.
Congratulations. What an imagination. I think Napbegone was my favorite. And great title.
CONGRATULATIONS, Marilee, on your 1ST PLACE MASTERS WIN!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOOOOEEEEE!! :D The names of your little creatures reminded me of Dr. Seuss, and I think little kids would get a big kick out of them, too! Cute story!!!!!!!!
***Congrats!*** I finally got a chance to read this and it is hilarious! A wonderfully well-written story and well-deserved win. ^_^ The Fleegle was my fave.
How creative!! This was a delightful read, and I can just imagine it as a children's book with fun illustrations.
I love this story. How creative!