The Official Writing Challenge
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Hehe, fun entry! I like it. Nice subtle point woven in there, too.
Hehe So cute. I love the humor mixed in with the message. I'd expand on this though. Take us up one of those mountains with Moses so we can "feel" his (and our) muscles ache!
Iteresting approach to fitness. Also a new view of Moses.
Very clever - and definitely a unique approach. I enjoyed this. Would love to see it expanded.
Clever voice, and a really effective way of making an important point. I'd have liked to read more of this.
Cute! I would have liked more too. :) Jo
Who would've thought Moses was an ancient bodybuilder???? Thanks for an interesting take on those mountaintop experiences we all long for. Now I know why I'm so flabby--gotta get out the hiking boots more often.
Looks like you could get a whole series out of this idea. I really liked the light tone carrying a big message.
LOL, kept me smiling. Very creative and well written. Great job.
I like the humor and tone of this. Kinda like a fitness 'commercial'. A 'delightful' look at the real thing. ^_^
This went right to my heart. I love the style, very cute and such a valuable lesson.