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Interesting read. You started out really well but seemed to lose me when he went upstairs and started rising above life on the "terra firma". The point you made was really good, it just seemed to be missing something, though I'm not sure what. Thank you for sharing your gift! :)
I loved this vision! What a gentle way for God to give and gracious message.
A science fiction inspirational - cool! I liked your point about mistaken perspective. Very well taken. :-)
Congratulations Suzanne!!!
Congrats Suzanne! This is very in'sight'ful.
CONGRATULAIONS! I am so happy you won!!
Suz! Congrats on your win. This was an inspiring story. Very humbling and beautiful. I read it out loud to my family. It's a winner for sure.
Suz, this piece made me feel all tingly. I love it. How comforting to be reminded that there is a bigger picture. Great work!
Congrats on the Ed choice for this article.
As usual, it's such a great thought. I love seeing your stories how you're so in tune with God.
Leave me a message sometime.
Once again - congrats!