The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/25
You have presented a believable conflict and good resolution. The third paragraph from bottom seems to have a missing word or words. I had trouble reading it to make it flow right.
A good message. Blessings
10/29/25
Great potential for a great story told from your or Johnny's viewpoint.
I can see the potential in this narrative. I felt like there were words or parts left out at the end. Not sure if that was a copy issue or not.