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You do well in contrasting how the world binges with the Christian's form. It's quite a contrast, isn't it. I never thought of it in the way you described well. A big thumbs up.
I enjoyed this interesting take on the topic. You pulled me in right away. Instead of having all the people yell the same phrases at once, have just one or two people speak at a time. It's unlikely they'd all shout the same words. I liked the three different descriptions of how one might binge, but you could use a smoother transition between them. Your ending was great. It really touched my heart and spoke to me in a powerful way.

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