The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/25
Interesting speculation.
03/10/25
Some interesting thoughts from left field, as is how you've set it in a poetic form instead of prose.
I enjoyed the subtle humor in this piece and can relate to it. While I like the thought of Jesus having brunch, it felt a bit sudden. A smoother transition would have helped--maybe a stanza about the MC praying or reading the Bible might have made it smoother. You did nail the topic for sure and you made me stop and think, which is always good.