The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/24
Well written devotional style piece. Well done
Great devotion.
Blessings
I enjoyed this devotion. You made some good points. I'd love to read even more of your opinion about the verses and if you included a prayer at the end, it would be even more powerful. Tiny note, ellipses should only have three dots when used to show missing words. I think you nailed the topic, delivered a clear Christian message and made me stop and think.
Congratulations!