The Official Writing Challenge
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05/02/24
Amen!
Beautifully said.
God Bless~
This is a lovely retelling of Jesus' life. I can feel your passion in your words. Just a couple of things. Try not to start a sentence with a numeral. Instead write it out or rearrange the sentence so it starts with a word. Double check rules on when touse semi-colon and commas. You've a powerful piece here that is spot on topic and has a clear message.