The Official Writing Challenge
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Great use of the Challenge topic.
Sam was easy to warm to.
It would obviously mean editing out a few words but had Sam moved a little more e.g. shaken his head in disbelief at the advice of reconciliation or grinned momentarily when remembering his father’s silent reply, I‘d have liked him even more.
The above advice comes from someone who could not even dream up a single idea for the topic ?.
Good on you.