The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/23
Thank you for your entry. You have written well about the word soul, but perhaps could have explored the second homonym sole, more, and tied the two words together in some way. Keep writing, we can all improve through practice.
I really love your closing phrase. Keep writing!
03/14/23
Right on topic!
This is a lovely devotion. I liked how you started with an experience so many can relate to. If you haven't considered submitting devotions to FW, I'd urge you to do so. You've a knack for it.