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11/11/22
Interesting piece. And it is a beautiful worship song.
But how clearly we unhamonious Christian's attitudes can be. Don't we have all week to worship the Lord in the melody we prefer and then cherish being a part of the body of Spirit led believers on Sunday- no matter the choice of melody?
This is an interesting take on the topic. It's definitely thought-provoking, which I think is always good. I think you could expand even more on how Peter would handle a modern church. Music differences is the least problem I see in modern churches. It was hard to follow at times because you were speaking of present church but used a past tense. Perhaps a future or present tense might've made it easier to follow. Also be careful when using ellipses. There should only be three dots with no spaces except when it's at end of sentence, then it could have 4 with one space like this... .) Overall, I think you did a nice job writing on topic, delivering a clear message, and writing an interesting story.