The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/21
I enjoyed reading the story you wove together. Nicely written and warmly told.
06/11/21
Nicely done.
It is no small feat to bring a familiar Bible story to life so that it seems fresh and real. You have done just that!
This was a powerful story. You opened my eyes to a new thought. I can't imagine anyone thinking someone was worthless, yet I know I've heard people say as much. It makes my heart hurt and makes me more mindful. Some of the dialog could be tweaked some. I did cringe on the double negative (not nothing) because it didn't fit the character in my opinion, but I think you wove a powerful story. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!
11/28/21
Powerful!!!!