The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/21
I like the alliteration of the title. A suggestion, I would have the title match what you say in the article. The title is Troubles and Trials and twice in the article you begin a sentence with Trials and Troubles. Why not have them match either change the title to Troubles and trials or use trials and troubles in the body. I would use double quotes in the beginning rather than single and I think you have some stray apostrophes or single quotes. An inspiring message that is good to hear. and a good encouraging ending.
You did a nice job of showing the topic throughout the Bible. You have a great message too.