The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/17
I like your use of the topic. Your story has happened far to many times across our country.

Well written. Thanks for sharing.
I think this is a great story. You did a nice job of developing the characters. The dialog moved the story along. Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level and 19 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.