The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/17
Your main character is portrayed well. I can hear her story and her struggle. Good take on the word brand. She belongs to only One.
This is a great story. You hooked me right from the beginning g and kept my attention to the very end. It's one of my favorites this week for sure. Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 16th overall. Happy Dance!