The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/15
This is a lovely story about one of God's faithful servants.

I enjoyed reading very much.

You did a good job of describing the muddy meadow and the by product of the cows.

You are right on topic, too.

Thanks for sharing.
05/29/15
This story illustrated hoe important it is to never give up on someone and are willing to meet them where they are at. The story flowed off the page. It seemed like you may have been raised in a farming community. Excellent job.
05/30/15
I really enjoyed this story. I could see it, and wanted to read it all the way through. My heart cheered for the pastor and his faithfulness.
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