The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/15
Excellent story, well done in content, delivery along with a great message.

Nicely done.

God bless~
I like your out-of-the-box box humor. It does a nice job in really showing your message. You did a great job with the topic and I enjoyed your take on this story.
A very humorous rewrite! Sibling rivalry is a dish best served with Gaviscon . . .
02/26/15
Congrats!

God BLess~
Congratulations on ranking 20th overall! Happy Dance!