The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/14
Excellent writing...well done.

God bless~
I understand and could sense your excitement about traveling to such an exotic place. Another one for my bucket list! One way to improve the article (especially when restricted to 750 words) would be to zero in on the unusual and skip the more mundane aspects (like the custom's line and the part of the trip that was "uneventful.") I was more drawn in for the fishing trip and the chimp sanctuary on the island, and the experience at the Lubiri Palace. That's where your writing skills shined!
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