The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/14
Wonderful writing this biblical inspired piece...I enjoyed it immensely.

God bless~
10/31/14
I love Bible stories, and this situation Elijah found himself in was certainly intense! I really appreciated your faithfulness to Scripture, however, I would have liked to see you focus a bit more on the probable emotions of Elijah as he waited for God to respond and as he faced the mocking crowd. It would have ramped up the suspense factor a bit more for me. Thank you for sharing this true account.
11/01/14
Great rendition of a suspenseful moment in history. I enjoy your style of writing. Wonderful job.
God Bless
11/02/14
Thanks for sharing your entry of this well known and meaningful Bible story! My only suggestion would be to employ writing techniques that allow the reader to figure out how Elijah or the prophets of Baal may be feeling by showing their mannerisms etc. (as opposed to spelling out how they felt.)
11/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~