The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/14
Well done and well played! I really enjoyed this imaginative piece all the way through.

Nice job.

God bless~
11/01/14
I enjoyed your clever approach to this dreaded encounter. Great job on a fun read.
I love the twist at the end!
11/02/14
Like your play on names and the life decisions that face a 17 year old. No mater what education/social standing someone is from we all have to make decision not necesarially be forced into
Hilarious and gripping!
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
You did an awesome job. I could feel my heart thumping in pace with the story. The ending was fantastic. I love unexpected ones, but usually see them coming, but I didn't predict yours, which made it all the more enjoyable. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
11/06/14
Congrats Kat!

Great job.

God bless~
11/06/14
CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR E.C. WIN!! Your story was wonderfully suspenseful, and I loved the humorous surprise at the end! WAY TO WRITE!! :)
11/06/14
Well done for your EC Kat. A very absorbing journey through a teenage mind and its priorities, and yes, a very creative twist to wrap it up.
Congratulations on first place and EC! Really enjoyable!
11/07/14
I loved this line: Inside my head, panics ostinato completes the cacophony.

I had to look up ostinato and it's a perfect word for the situation.

A creative spin on the topic. Well done and congratulations!