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02/14/14
My goodness! Your story is so powerful and so strong in testimony of your faith and love of God.

That image of the man in the ski mask made me cry for what you had gone through, and your courage made me applaud.

Thank you for shaing your intense story and your values of Christianity in an entry I won't soon forget!

God bless you~
02/15/14
I loved the Red Sea parallels to struggles in life. You are supremely talented and very strong in so many ways. I pray The Lord brings healing to others through your writing.
02/15/14
What a relatable story. Horrific crime yet you wrote this in away that was brief and left little to the imagination. Sexual assaults can be difficult to write out: you did so nicely.

If this is a true story, my heart aches for you. One never "gets over it" and it is a long road of emotional and psychological recovery. I pray that God's healing love rain on you.
You wrote an emotionally moving story of bad things happening to good people. The story showed that when one hits bottom there is only one thing left to do, look up.Your comparison to the Israelites at the Red Sea was excellent to show God is there to help if we turn to Him. Hopefully, the rest of the street of life will be very good.
02/16/14
What an incredible story! My heart goes out to Hannah, and I am reminded of God's faithfulness in the midst of the storms of life.

I think that this story could be even more powerful with the addition of some details that show the emotion that the characters felt. Maybe we could see Hannah cupping her face in her hands, or placing her hand over her growing belly.

I'm sure that this testimony has blessed many and will continue to do so. Through it we can see God's love and guidance through trials that seem impossible to weather.
Your story brought tears to my eyes. Thank you. Through your writing you showed what it means to trust God unconditionally.
02/18/14
I'm sure this is not easy to share, if you are writing about yourself. Mysteries abound in our lives as Christians. Things we may never understand, things that change the course of our lives and things only God can help us through make us who we are.

Thanks for sharing.

02/19/14
Oh my, your testimony entry is tragic yet beautiful in its profound conclusion. It has a ring of truth which I hope in my heart is not.
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