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This is stunning. You have exposed this woman's soul. I'm tremendously impressed! Love the free-flowing format; it was absolutely perfect for the mood of this piece.
This is a fantastic piece of work! I love it.
Magnificent. I love the way you've used language, not worrying about subjects and objects but getting to the raw beauty of the words. Indeed, you've given us a great peek into a slice of life for this woman. Well done.
Breathtaking artistry! What marvelous imagery--"The moon drowns on its endless course around the earth." You took me into her world, and made me forget I was reading. I could smell the ocean, see the forlorn eye of the old dog...You left me reverberating with her desperate cry...A literary treasure, going straight into my favorites.
Oh Yeggs, this is beautiful. As we read, we experience the essence of this piece - and the hope of God's mercy.

See you in a few weeks dear friend.
Yeggy, there is not a word that can descibe this poem. A favorite for sure.

I fear my comments are not enough, after reading such a pure experience. I felt it all, I knew it all. The depth of your heart did not surprise me in the least. You are a gift and I'm so grateful... Much love, Val