The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 938 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
06/08/06
Wow, there is some great poetry here...however, it's alittle confusing reading three poems at once. I would strike the reference from the hymn and make two poems out of what is left. I think they would both stand well on their own.
07/05/06
Thank you for touching my heart today! Well written, great message!