The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved that last line "..remind Satan of his future." This was a terrifc poem. So much truth, packed in such a beautiful package.
I liked your poem a lot. Your meter was a little off, but your rhyme was great and you had a nice message.
05/14/06
Oh yes! "When Satan brings up YOUR past - Remind him of
HIS future!" Great suff.
05/14/06
Great job. It captured me from the beginning and kept me throughout. I liked the line about our sins being "marks as black as coal". So, Jesus keeps a big bottle of "wite-out" handy, eh? :>)
05/16/06
A poem of hope. Satan can only keep us company if we don't keep Jesus close by. He alone can wipe out our sins.
From "hopeless" to "peace"!

I've been in this spot. Thanks for the reminder of victory. :-)