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By Lynn Jacky
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The people of Eden were extremely loyal to the king. They were pleased and delighted to have a peaceful environment where they could marry and raise their children. They started growing fine crops of grains, grapes, and dates. Horses, sheep and goats grazed lazily in the valleys and hills below.
One dark night, a ruthless band of Anahi warriors, with evil intent in their hearts came riding on their black stallions. Like a violent destructive storm, they crashed through the outer gates. Suddenly, in total confusion, the hoops of their horses veered upwards, pawing desperately into the night air. In total bewilderment they all came to a full stop.
An illuminating brilliant white light, shone purposely to blind their eyes from going any further.
A voice spoke, “Anahi, this night I have seen the evil you have planned, you have been weighed and found wanting.”
“Who are you? You have no authority over me.” Snapped the chief Anahi.
The defiant words triggered a creative fire, a protective Ring of Fire that circled around the whole Kingdom of Eden. Then, a lone white figure on a white horse, slowly glided forward, out from the illumination.
“I am Guardian, watcher and seer over the Kingdom of Eden.”
“The Divine One has spoken, continue with this evil intent to murder my people and you will deal with my wrath. Your whole kingdom, men women and children will end this night.”
The chief of the Anahi dismounted his horse, bowed before the Guardian thanking him for his mercy in sparing his kingdom. Galloped away saying, “Evil will be back another day.”
The Guardian raised his right hand, the Ring of Fire ceased, the illumination left, only he remained to safely guard the Kingdom and lands of Eden.
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