The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/22
Spectacular way to express the topic, beautiful!

Blessings~
10/28/22
I liked the way you invite the reader to accept Jesus in the parting words of your submittal. Jesus was truly alone at the end. Now we are all together
A powerful story told in a fresh and engaging manner. Thanks for demonstrating how creative the written word can be!
10/29/22
I think the worst part of Jesus’ sacrifice would have been when his Father turned away. Good job of giving us a fresh look.
10/29/22
Wow! That is a creative thought. Great thinking.
01/12/23
Beautifully written. A wonderful take on the subject. A well deserved first place.