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This was an interesting read. It was written very well, and I liked the ending. Good job.
This makes me want to cry. The victory in Jesus is so beautiful, and this piece is written with excellence. Awesome!
Beautifully written--at first I thought this was going to be a typical "it was only a dream" story, but it was so much more! This was great!
"Sometimes they are merely a byproduct of life in this fallen world. At other times, they are the result of sin that masquerades as something innocent and exciting, but morphs from gentle breeze to hurricane before I know it."

Very powerful writing of truth. Thanks and God Bless.
Liked this line: "I do not fight storms. I relax in my Saviors embrace and allow them to rage until they wind down. Storms always wind down." You've made a good point!
Thanks for sharing such a personal experience so well, Debbie. I particularly like the way you used a little metaphor to echo the big one: morphs from gentle breeze to hurricane before I know it. Yeggy