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I thought this was really well written. Made me feel for David and want to kick him at the same time! Wonderful message about the reality of consequences to our actions. God must just shake his head & weep for us sometimes. Nicely done.
The word that comes to my mind after reading this is "futility." We are weak humans who so easily spin out of control. Our only hope is in the Rescuer.

Well done!
The slice of life story that "tells it like it is" - and how many people get hurt with just one little sin; I agree with the other Commenter; God must shake His head at our pitiful attempts to control our own lives; but He still loves us and wants to come into our hearts and make us better. Well done, nicely written and God Bless.