The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this. It is a good reminder of just how good God is.
Vivid writing, and a lovely reminder of our hope in God.
I really enjoyed this entry, especially since The Wizard of Oz is one of my most favorite movies!
The descriptive writing for this piece gave me great visions for each season. God is so good and
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God is our hope and the reflection of His light throughout the seasons is a great reminder that even in the gray, cloudy, storms...there is much to be thankful for. I enjoyed this article very much...thank you for writing it!
Loved this piece! You carried it through to the end and finished it well.
What a beautiful and powerful piece. Even your description of the rough summer was splendid and full of details. You pulled me in right away. The only advice I'd offer is tiny--work on tightening it up some, getting rid of unnecessary words. For example:
an ear of corn on the cob.
You don't need 'on the cob' because if it's an ear of corn, it's on the cob. There's a few other spots like that here and there (leaves on the tree). It's a tiny thing, but it helps with the flow and leaves you more words to paint your beautiful descriptions. I think the verse you selected is a perfect fit to your message. You made me stop and think about what affects my moods and how color can make a difference in my outlook. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 12th overall. Happy Dance!
I really enjoyed your short story. The imagery was excellent. God truly brings us through the tough times as well as the good. His influence is everywhere even when we don’t necessarily see it. Thank you for sharing your story.
God bless!