The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked your story and definitely wanted more. Especially to see the transformation continue. Cheers
02/07/20
Oh, I loved this touching and warm story. On topic and certainly brought a good message forward.
Well done,
Blessings~
02/08/20
Interesting story, though I wonder where the asperger's comes in and how it related to his desire to save money.
02/08/20
Great story. Well written, kept me engaged. I agree with Terry and Barbara: I wanted more... and I know with the 750 word limit, it's difficult to get out all the information critical for understanding the character, without confusing the reader... but those not familiar with Asperger's may not understand the connection.
02/13/20
Very interesting story. I hope his personal relationships got better.
02/13/20
Awwww... this was so sweet. I agree with the others ... without a word count limit, this could be very nicely developed into a full essay!