The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/20
This really held my attention and your ending really caught me by surprise! Very good.
01/16/20
Excellent writing in this descriptive and overwhelming powerful piece.

Great message, and a purposeful ending giving hope to the reader!



Well done,

Blessings~
01/16/20
Oh my gosh, immediate tears at the end! I was pretty upset for a moment when they found her...but you brought it home with joy (everlasting and full of glory!). Beautiful piece.
This gave me goosebumps. So descriptive and realistic. Well done and I hope it places!
A beautiful illustration of God's love. Such a realistic and powerful piece.

Tears for the pain and the joy of the characters homecoming.

Excellent writing and I hope it places
01/24/20
Debra,
I thought this was powerfully written.
Congrats!
Blessings~
01/24/20
Thank you all for your kind words.
Debra,

Congratulations on your 3rd place win the advanced division.

You won my heart with this entry. It has stuck with me and reminded me to help others.