The Official Writing Challenge
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You leave me grinning from ear to ear with this delightful story. Find an illustrator and turn this into a children's book. I'd love to buy copies for the grandchildren. You are a great writer!
This is an uplifting and delightful read. Well written and an adorable story for children.

Good job,
Great punchline! You've got me laughing out loud.
I loved your fable and laughed out loud at your punchline. I also love your alliteration. Well done!
SOOOOO creative! What a great twist on the challenge subject! Great job. Congratulations!
This is such a sweet story. I had a Guinea pig named Harry and he looked a lot like I imagined your Harry. With some tightening and tweaking, this would make an adorable picture book. I really enjoyed it. (Kids' stories are my all-time favorite genre, so that's a huge compliment.) Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 12th overall. Happy Dance!