The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/17
It was a cute story that reminded me of watching my grandfather shave.

I really had a hard time understanding what the first paragraph had to do with the story or topic.

You also had a double negative. Just a minor error.

The topic was covered but I think the time with uncle outshined the dull razor.

Thanks for touching a good memory of mine. God bless.