The Official Writing Challenge
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You did great with this. The beginning drew me in right away and your details created a picture in my mind. It wasn't easy to make this story fit the topic, but I think you succeeded and did so without making it dull to read.
05/19/17
Thank you for telling Jeremiah's story. The world should know. I would guess God's work here would warrant much more than a short story and perhaps you can tell that too.

You did a great job with this. What a humbling call of exhortation for all.

I get the impression Jeremiah was very young when this happened?
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
05/25/17
Congratulations on your 1st place finish this week, Phillip.

Thank you for sharing Jeremiah's story. What a courageous young man.
05/25/17
Congratulations on your 6th place finish overall!
Congratulations, Phillip, on yur EC for this compelling story.f