The Official Writing Challenge
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03/12/17
I enjoyed your honest testimony about your struggles and your journey in the faith. It sounds like you are right where you should be.
Just a note: since it is hard to get the indented format for the verse and because The Message version sound so much like everyday conversion, it took me a little bit to realize you weren't quoting scripture anymore. Maybe use quotation marks around the verse next time.
03/12/17
A very nice testimony. Don't feel alone when you are struggling with the everyday challenges that shackle us all and weigh us all down. God knows this. He will lighten the load. Keep the faith and keep running. Keep writing and expressing yourself. I would like to see more dialogue. This will help to reveal your true passion instead of just telling us about it. I think you did well on hitting the topic. My prayers go your way. God bless.
03/13/17
Thank you for sharing this with us, it was well written.

Nicely done

Blessings~