The Official Writing Challenge
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08/06/16
That was a good devotional, but it does need some work in paragraphing, white space etc. The first thing that hit me was bazaar which should be bizarre. You had good thoughts. You just need some finesse-ing of it.
08/08/16
As already mentioned I saw a few mistakes, but overall, this is interesting and informative.

Using paragraphs helps the reader follow your thoughts better. Sometimes one runs into another without white spaces.

You have a way with words that I enjoy reading. Thanks for sharing.