The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/16
Loved this! It is a very captivating, well-written devotional. At least, it was for me. It spoke to me, gaining my interest, touching my heart, and making me smile.

My only two cents: Next time, instead of 1950ies, try nineteen-fifties or 1950s.
08/01/16
You expressed what so many others can connect to...the struggle to obey God. It is a daily struggle, and you expressed that very well.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance!