The Official Writing Challenge
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What a great story. I have to say I got a little lost as you went into such detail of explaining who said what to who and so forth. None the less, it shows how wonderfully God works.
God works in mysterious ways; I'm glad the MC got in touch with her long-lost friend.

In parts of your story, I thought you had too many characters which lead to some confusion.