The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/16
What a great story. I have to say I got a little lost as you went into such detail of explaining who said what to who and so forth. None the less, it shows how wonderfully God works.
02/25/16
God works in mysterious ways; I'm glad the MC got in touch with her long-lost friend.

In parts of your story, I thought you had too many characters which lead to some confusion.