The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice devotional. I think I would change it a bit so you aren't preaching, but are including yourself. Rather than "my prayer for you", make it a prayer for all of us or each one of us.
Nicely written devotional. I agree with Pat that an example from your own life would pack more punch.
This is a lesson I can't get enough of. I do think a personal illustration from your own experience would make it fly a lot higher. Help the reader to see the lesson in real life.
I liked your title, "Crumbs from the Master's Table." I believe you did a good job of being on topic. I may have incorporated more showing and less telling to make your devotional hook the reader.

Nice job.
I agree with the earlier comment about the title. You caught my attention there! From the title I had expected more ficus on her words but I liked the way you focused on her persistence. The verses you used were well incorporated and illustrated your point well.
Congratulations, Michol, on placing third in the Advanced Category. We can all learn a lot from the Canannite woman's example.
Congratulations on your 3rd place win in advanced.
Persistence pays off. Thank you for sharing.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 22 overall. Happy Dance!