The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/15
I loved this! It had a beautiful message along with light levity, a perfect combination to make this memorable.

Well done.

God bless~
04/19/15
I like how the main character is real and doesn't have it all together. If we're honest, we're all still a work in progress. Thanks for sharing.
04/23/15
Very fine story. Well written and expressed.

I would only suggest breaking the paragraphs up into smaller segments. It keeps the reader's attention and makes it easier to read.

Otherwise, a fine entry. Best of luck!
Nice! I enjoyed the subtle dry humor.

I think shorter paragraphs might make it easier on a reader's eyes. But all in all, I enjoyed it and it flowed very well.