The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/05
You've got a lot of lovely things to say. Watch for unnecessary apostrophes and inconsistent meter; this poem has a great deal of potential.
"There are the four seasons that we must endure". And each has its own good and bad points! I love Spring, and Summer, and Autumn (Fall) - but barely endure Winter. Interesting approach to the topic. Keep writing.
12/09/05
Interesting poem. I'm not sure I understood the last line of the last stanza. I must have missed something.