The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my goodness! I am crying openly. This was so intense, my emotions are surging.

What a powerful message. This story should be on all of the "PRO LIFE" pamphlets and everywhere anyone can see!

THis was brilliant, and so sad at once. Excellent writing!

God bless~
This must earn an Editor's Choice. Excellently presented . . .
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
Well written and powerful. I couldn't make sense of what was happening at first - it was a real twist to learn it was the voice of an unborn child! Thanks for sharing your creative work.
Soooo sweet! Good job! :)
Congratulations! What an awesome piece and so spot on for the topic.

Congrats on the EC...this story was phenomenal, and in my heart a winner all the way.

I thought you were going to take it all...but it stayed with me, and I've shared it with so many friends, so it was in a sense...a blue ribbon winner for so many!

Excellent excellent excellent!!!! Well done!

The best story for me in this weeks challenge.

God bless~
Congratulations, Jo, on your 5th place EC. So well-deserved for this moving story, told with drama and compassion. Great writing!
Words almost fail me. I realized at the end that I held my breath through much of it - it was so gripping! It made a huge impact and I won't forget it soon.