The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/14
Excellent ending, justice prevailed...sometimes this modern technology (which can be draining at times) can be used for good!

Great writing!

God bless~
Wow! Powerful punch indeed. I enjoyed this very much . . .
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
11/09/14
Good writing here and satisfying ending!
Great story - clever title - good use of dialogue to move the action forward. I like the motif of using a blind person's POV, thereby having to rely on senses other than sight. Only one "slip" out of the MC's POV when you jumped into Samantha's head. Otherwise, very well crafted fiction.
11/13/14
Congrats.
God bless~