The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/14
Well written and well done.
The wrap up was perfectly executed.

God bless~
Very moving, poignant . . .
Hugs, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
11/09/14
I enjoyed reading your fine piece, and hope it is part of a bigger story you are working on! Keep writing...
11/13/14
COngrats.
God bless~
11/13/14
Very nice work. I would have voted this #1!
11/13/14
Wow. This is so beautifully written. I love the details like the branches bent like broken umbrellas. It is touching with an air of mystery that makes me want to read more. Congratulations on placing in the editors choice!