The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked that story. You showed the emotion really well and it had a good message of hope. My only suggestion is that there seemed to be a bit of a gap. You mentioned leaving for India, but the scene you focused on was in Germany. So maybe that could have been tied together a little better. But it was a great story of how God pursues us even when we have a roundabout way of seeking Him. well done.
10/10/14
Well written entry and moving story. I enjoyed reading this and loved the emotions it elicited through my heart, especially at the close!

God bless~
Very moving story, I really loved the way your MC showed how people look for God in so many things, yet there He is, just waiting. Thank you for sharing.
Your remembrance painted a true picture of "dismal"--from your life -- to your surroundings. I'm glad God appeared to you to change your life.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level.