The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a cute take on the topic. I liked your characters and explanations. Some of the dialog didn't sound like a sixteen-year-old teen, but that could just be me. It felt a bit too formal. You did do a nice job of showing the conflict right off the bat. I liked your message and it's something we can all relate to. Nice job.
09/05/14
Great messages here!
Fantastic job with the topic and I loved the entire story.

God bless~
09/08/14
This is adorable. I think the message is creative as is the use of the topic.

Well written.