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This is a cute story. I enjoyed the message. If you use tag lines, make sure the quote is part of the sentence. Ex:"I'm scared," said our six-year-old daughter. Better yet, use that spot to show the emotions of the character. Ex: "I'm scared." Our six-year-old daughter scrambled into my lap and wrapped her arms around me. You did a nice job picking the perfect verses to go along with this story. I also liked the subtle comparison of the raging storm to the power of God. He is wonderful and mighty. Nice job.
09/05/14
I loved this entire piece, it pulled me in and kept me all the way through.

Wonderful messages and timely reminders.

God bless~
09/08/14
Good storytelling and wonderful scripture to go with it.

You did a good job of writing and holding my interest.
Lovely . . .

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Hugs and prayers, Judi
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