The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/14
This was a beautifully written story with a fabulous message which fit the topic completely.
Nicely done!

God bless~
04/15/14
Ahhhh... that sounds so good - a perfect place to relax with God.
04/17/14
This is very well written and the visual pictures I received while reading it were amazing.

It does the topic justice. thanks for sharing.

You created such a wonderful sense of peace. I even read silently in a hushed tone because I didn't want to wake the others. Now that's pulling the reader into a story! Remember to put Bible verses in quotes. (I often use italics too, especially if the MC is reading.) Also an ellipsis should only have three dots and sometimes a fourth as a period. You did a great job with this and it encourages me to seek out God more in those quiet moments to balance my hectic mindset. Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. The highest rankings can be found in the message boards.