The Official Writing Challenge
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I totally loved this. Your sardonic sense of humor has impeccable timing. I found myself giggling throughout this delightful read. :-)
Love your sense of humor in this story. I laughed all the way through it. I'll be surprised if this one doesn't place. Great job.
Loved this-so Erma Bombeck! I thought I knew who wrote it, but now not so sure. Good job!
Love your voice; this was very entertaining.

Watch your use of hyphens. There were several hyphenated phrases here, and some of the hyphens weren't necessary.

You're a master of imagery and wit, and this was by far the most engaging piece I've read today.
Great job, loved the subtle, yet blatant humor.

Thanks. God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 6th in level three and 25 overall! HAPPY DANCE!!!